Daniel’s Public Speaking Notes.
Session 1: Authority, Depth & Expert Insights
09.04.2026
🌟 Your Superpowers
Daniel, you’re operating from a position of authority, and that’s your biggest asset. You already have some solid experience in public speaking and are leading really well.
Your superpower is your depth of knowledge and ability to articulate key takes, opinions and insights.
You can:
Speak at length with expertise
Go into detail and handle large amounts of content
Handle complex subject matter with confidence
That positions you as:
👉 a trusted expert voice
And that is incredibly valuable.
There were also moments (like the nail polish section) where your delivery became more expressive and engaging, showing that when the content frees up, your personality comes through strongly. You were able to deploy irony and dry humour well in that section and you really came to life (despite the silly topic)
That combination of:
👉 expertise + personality
is where your personal public speaking brand becomes very powerful.
You were also expert at the fillers exercise! You nailed it, no issues in that area.
🔧 Builds / Next Focus Areas
The Real Shift: Content → Then Delivery
The key insight here:
This isn’t primarily about performance, it’s about pressure from the content.
You’re carrying:
Dense amounts of material
High responsibility
Precision
So the first unlock is:
👉 Make the content more human, engaging, and yours using some of the speech ingredients we discussed.
Once that shifts, your delivery will naturally open up.
Your Authority = Opinion + Insight
Your next level is stepping into your voice within the content.
When using facts and statistics - is there a way to turn into a statistical, knowledge based story? (This will also make it easier to remember).
Given you will often be talking about future scenarios with the RRA, is there an opportunity to use imagery ‘Picture this’ ‘Imagine…’ where you paint a picture of a future scenario for a client. This also is an opportunity to start stepping away from the notes, the imagery could be every so slightly different each time, but you’re still painting the same picture. Stories and case studies are harder for future scenarios, but they are really the things that can sell an audience, where possible. Could you have a short anecdote as your intro?
But:
Your take
Your angle
Your perspective
This is where you become:
👉 not just knowledgeable → memorable and influential. You really light up when you start to share these and it’s of the most value to your clients. Ensure you position this in your intro, you could even make some humour out of having ‘a take’ ‘a view’, if it feels right and bring a bit of you into your opening. You joked about feeling like you had taken on all 11000 cases yourself, now this pertains to a different section, but if you can make a joke about how much time you spend doing this you will both establish credibility and make the audience laugh at the same time. Of course, take what you need and leave the rest, as it has to come from a style that suits you, but making every point a speech ingredient is what brings it to life and takes you to the next level. I also don’t want to overwhelm you, but am giving you a lot to work with as you foundations and experience in speaking are already solid.
Metaphors, analogy’s and similes can also be powerful language tools for you: taking the complex and making it simple.
Controlled Freedom (Coming Off Script)
You don’t need to abandon structure - just introduce controlled freedom.
Start small:
Headlines instead of full scripts
Prompts instead of paragraphs
Speak around key ideas
This is where your:
👉 authority + personality + credibility
all come together. Stories and imagery can help you here - they can make it more memorable for you and the audience. I’d suggest to get to that freedom you desire, start by going of script for one part of a section, then going off script for a whole section. You may also find the slide can support you - e.g 3 images onscreen that will prompt you to know what to talk about. You’ve loads of content, but even if we move you away from the notes for part of it for this event, then gradually progress it. Also, remember, the audience will not know what you’ve missed out! Even the best TED speakers miss whole sections! But the key thing is, they were vibrant and engaging and memorable.
Warmth/ Tone Will Follow 😊
The warmth and tone we discussed is important, but it’s a result, not the starting point. (Even if it’s not the warmth, it’s finding a tone (feeling) that suits you. We can chat further on this)
As you:
Loosen the content
Reduce pressure
Speak more freely
Your expression and connection will naturally increase. I was coming from the outside in, but realised after that it’s the content shift that will help you.
Use the Room to Your Advantage
Audience interaction is a powerful tool for you and you’ve integrated this well already.
Ask a question (quick show of hands who… )
Let them discuss (share for 15 seconds with the person next to you)
This gives you:
Breathing space
Reset time
A natural transition
It also allows you to step off script more comfortably.
Permission: It Doesn’t Need to Be Perfect
This is key.
You don’t need:
Perfect wording (only on vital legal moments)
Full scripting
BUT:
👉 clarity, authority, and connection
I’ll share a Ted Talk with you, where you’ll see the speaker actually makes a few mistakes, adds in a few too many words, but, is very much himself and that’s what people will buy into. This is challenging coming from a profession where you have to be so precise.
🚀 Key Identity Shift
You’re not just someone who knows the material.
👉 You’re becoming a recognised authority who can make complex ideas accessible and engaging.
You have excellent takes and subject knowledge
You have bags of experience - excited to see your speaking develop. Great work and leadership!
Session 2 - 16.04.2026
Daniel, you’re in a really strong position as a speaker, and it was a genuine pleasure to work with you. Love your professionalism.
Once you find your rhythm, you have a rich, resonant and likeable voice, the kind of voice that works exceptionally well for podcasts, radio, and speaking events. That’s a real asset and part of your unique public speaking brand.
You’ve also nailed your key message, which is hugely important. There’s clarity and authority in what you’re saying, and your diction is strong and easy to follow.
One of your standout moments was your response to the Slido replies. You really came alive there. There was humour, expression, and a sense of fun. The next step is to bring more of that aliveness and lightness across all sections of your talk.
A simple way to develop this is to film yourself and watch it back. You’re looking for the shift where your face feels more engaged, expressive, and connected, rather than slightly more neutral or detached. When you hit that point of “ah, that’s it,” you’ll know. This will also really support your social content. I will share a video below so you can see how it comes across.
Your opening is a key area to focus on. It’s naturally where the nerves are highest, so giving that section extra attention (rehearsal) will help you feel more secure. Once you settled in, you became noticeably more confident and engaging, so it’s about getting into that rhythm earlier.
Your instinct with hand gestures, particularly your left hand, was spot on. Now it’s about bringing that in more and fully committing. Strong, clear, consistent gestures will help reinforce your message, especially for those further back in the room.
Eye contact has improved well. As you relaxed, you also showed a nice variation in pitch, which makes you easy to listen to. There’s a calm, clear quality to your delivery that works in your favour.
Your key takes and opinions are high value. Keep leaning into those and enjoy sharing them.
Your structure is strong overall. One small enhancement could be adding a mini audience break before slide 19, as that section is quite dense. Something simple like “turn to the person next to you and discuss…” for 30 seconds would help reset the room and re-engage attention.
A few additional tweaks to consider:
You can have a bit more fun with lines like “I could speak about this all day”, perhaps turning it into a light joke, for example referencing a senior associate speaking all day. Even better if you can tie in with a personal interest to show more of you beyond the professional ‘I also happen to love medieval architecture, but I’ll refrain from bringing the roof down with that one too’ (you can do better than this, but you get the gist :))
Continue to include the back of the room in your delivery. Speaking to the back row more directly will strengthen your presence, especially in fuller rooms
Root your posture slightly more. Think “be the tree”. There was just a touch of movement in the legs and between legs that can be steadied
Slide 14, soften the framing ‘Every tenancy could be a legal case’ slightly. For example, acknowledge that it may feel daunting, then reinforce that Dean Wilson is there to support. “We’re on your side”
Slide 20, opportunity for a light joke, for example pets, property becoming a menagerie, or a film reference like The Lion King or Ace Ventura or ‘you property becoming like London Zoo.’
Slide 21, instead of saying people are wrong, reframe it more neutrally: “X number of people said Y, when in fact Z is the correct answer”
Small language tweak, “landscape” may land better than “regime”
Overall, you’re a strong, credible speaker with real authority. As you bring in more expression, lightness, and ease, your impact will increase significantly.
Really well done, and an absolute pleasure to work with.
Daniel – Post Event Feedback Summary
Daniel, it was an absolute pleasure to work with you. It was impressive to see how you took on every piece of feedback in your final speech.
You delivered with strong grounding, taking your time and using pause effectively. Your eye contact and pacing improved significantly, your warmth came through more clearly, and your posture was noticeably more assured. Of course, these things become easier when you are more familiar with the content, at the end of the process.
You come across as calm, thoughtful and composed, with a voice that is highly suited to speaking, deploying a lovely range in pitch. The clips we grabbed for social media of you have a lovely authority to them - you come across as trustworthy, credible and expert in your field.
Development Focus
The key development area for you now is gradually moving off script and continuing to grow your repertoire of speech ingredients including rhetorical language.
A TED-style talk approach would be particularly powerful here. Speaking without notes may feel challenging at first, but it will allow you to come alive even more as a speaker and build even stronger trust with your audience. This is less suited to information heavy presentations, but would be great for speaking in situations where you have one key message and build an engaging speech around that. I will propose some TED style options for coaching to Dean Wilson, and will also send you a couple of resources to take a look at.
You are already strong in delivering opinions, facts and exploring case studies. I think going forward, we could explore more of the rhetorical devices and language choices as well as occasional storytelling, which will elevate your delivery to the next level. To develop a Tedx Talk, it will be developing an idea, take or insight that is new, novel or a new angle on something within your field that will make your application stand out. TedX talk tend to be about one transformative insight rather than giving lots of information. You could begin to gently consider ideas that you might like to explore for this.
Forward Trajectory
Your trajectory is towards larger speaking opportunities and continued development as a high-level communicator.
With ongoing practice, refinement and integration of rhetorical language and development of standout ideas you can become a highly credible and engaging speaker across a range of platforms.